Monday, 6 April 2015


Amisha was five when she crossed the narrow street on the other side of the road.

She was looking for something, searching something and going by the road, she discovered a few stuff, shops, hawkers, vehicles, houses- old and new. But it was one house which looked ugly.. it had a broken door.. and that struck something in her.

“It’s all shattered..How can someone live here..? Poor people”, she thought by herself and went inside.

Astonished she was, just at the entrance, witnessing the huge house, the exotic garden, the ornate pillars, the splashy pool, pruned grasses.. it was beyond words to describe what she saw!

It was then she learned this fact of life to not judge anything or anyone by what looks outside, without verifying the inside, which was all the gift of was her inquisitive hunt!
This Five Sentence Fiction is written for Lillie McFerrin Writes- Hunt

Happy Reading


10 Discussion

  1. Very cool! Hope you had a good Easter. New follower here. I'm stopping by from the "A to Z" challenge, and I look forward to visiting again!


    1. That's sounds really good Sylvia :)
      Thanks a lot..


  2. One never knows the entire picture unless one tries to find out ... lovely story :-)

  3. Excellent story with great insight. I really love this.

  4. Awesome and true that. Anything should not be judged by the appearance, one should look for beauty inside and not outside.


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