Thursday, 4 June 2015

Pond


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A thousand feet above
High in the sky, an eagle locates
pond to quench her thirst!

Written for Haiku Horizons

Happy Reading

Cheers

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Haiku is a traditional form of a Japanese poetry that consists of 3 lines, following a 5-7-5 syllable rule (first and third line 5 syllables, middle line 7 syllables). They don’t necessarily have to rhyme.

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  1. And quenches the thirst...
    Nice!

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  2. Nicely done. But while writing haikus please try to follow the 5-7-5 syllable rule. It makes it more authentic.

    Your thoughts and emotions are at the right place :)

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    1. Hey Soumya,
      Thanks for the correction. Your comment made me read the haiku again. I first wrote the haiku, then read it, realized the error and then edited it, but by mistake published the non-edited/wrong one.. That is why was wondering, what went wrong.
      Now corrected..
      Thank you once again!

      Cheers

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