Tuesday, 13 October 2015

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It’s over, I said
Now nothing can heal the scar 
Scar of betrayal!

Written for Haiku Horizons

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Haiku is a traditional form of a Japanese poetry that consists of 3 lines, following a 5-7-5 syllable rule (first and third line 5 syllables, middle line 7 syllables). They don’t necessarily have to rhyme.

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  1. very thoughtful Haiku. such scars never heal.

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  2. Clear as a bell! Great photo shot!

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  3. There are things even time can't heal. Well written

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  4. direct, succinct.
    though traditionally Haikus were supposed to have a line for the season, this one is complete in itself.

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  5. But we always hope that the scars too would heal, don't we? Nice lines.

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    1. Yeah.. it's hope only, that keeps us going!
      Thanks Beloo

      Cheers

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  6. Time will. I don't know the dose yet, but some day it surely will.

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    1. I guess.. as they say, time heals all the wounds!

      Cheers

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  7. OH no.. they say time heals but some scars are such you remember them till the end .. been so many years I remeber each SECOND as it happened

    Bikram's

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    1. As they say.. some scar can never be healed!

      Cheers

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