Tuesday, 5 April 2016

D-Despair


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Gaby was 14 years old. The physical and mental changes were startling her. The curiousness, the pressure, countless emotions, and the latest crushes in her school, she had so much on her mind!

But whom to talk to? Parents wouldn’t understand! And her brother, he was only 6; he wouldn’t get a single thing! Or as she thought so!

One fine morning, while bathing and dancing cheerfully, something dropped from the window.

Terrified, she was. And was left aghast when she learned it was her brother, who used to peek in through the window and watch her naked! Every. Single. Day!

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  1. OMG!! That's so shocking and distressing!

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  2. Thats not so nice!!!! WIsh Gaby has the emotional and mental strength to give her brother a piece of her mind.

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    1. I guess. She herself was going through so much of turmoil.

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  3. That is so not nice! What kind of parents does Gaby have! Geetika bravo with the words that bring out so many emotions so vividly!
    @KalaRavi16 from
    Relax-N-Rave

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    1. O thank you so much Kala for your kind words. I have no idea what they mean to me!

      Cheers

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  4. This is so terrible. I do wish Gaby wouldn't give up on her parents and confide in them.

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    1. I just wish she could share this anyone in the family.

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  5. The brother clearly needs help. Such a terrible ordeal for a young girl.

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    1. Yes. Being curious to witness a thing as this clearly indicates something is wrong.

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  6. Good Lord Gaby, go and speak with your parents and for heavens sake latch your window...

    http://www.sunilavigauthor.blogspot.com.au/2016/04/dadheechi-or-dadhyanga-for-alphabet-d.html

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    1. I guess she should. But I don't if she has that much courage.

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  7. Yes, young boys are pretty good peeping toms!! Good she caught him. What a play of emotions!

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  8. Oh...that wasn't something expected. You brought it out in a nice way :)

    Thoughts...Sushree

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  9. Ohh I didn't expect that. That surely ain't right. Probably the whole family needs to have a talk.

    A Whimsical Medley
    Twinkle Eyed Traveller

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    1. Yes. And they shouldn't delay it further.

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  10. It must have come to be like a big shock to Gaby, adding to all her previous problems!
    I do wish she gathers the guts to talk about it to a friend or school teacher!

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    1. I wish he mustered the courage to do. we can only hope.

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  11. Oh my, that was creepy. Really well written. And with all the access to technology curios 6 year olds know a whole lot!!

    Great choice for D!

    Mine is D is for Diapers

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    1. I know. Exposure to technology can really play with a child's psychology.

      Thanks :)

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  12. oh my god! that's must be so shocking and agonising for the girl.

    Shubhangi @ The Little Princess

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    1. It truly was Shubhangi! I hope copes with it.

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  13. OMG! That's so creepy! Poor Gaby :(

    Cheers,
    Srivi - AToZChallenge
    The Piscean Me | Twitter

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    1. I know.. too much to take for a teenager.

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  14. Great post!!! Loved the emotion involved in this story! Left me wanting to know what happens next! Yikes!

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    1. Thanks Tawnya.. Stay tuned.. Who knows, it may come up in other alphabets;)

      Cheers

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  15. So gross :/ but I'm sure he needs help :(

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  16. What a bad boy! Poor Gaby must have been creeped out.

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    1. She was really freaked out! Anyone would be in this case I guess!

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  17. THat cant be right.. but then with all the media and everything kids are growing up tooo fast

    Bikram's

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    1. Yes, that's the thing with today's generation. They grow up too fast and do things they shouldn't too early!

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  18. Eww! Did she have curtains? If it were me I'd totally be dressing in the closet or bathroom from that point on.

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    1. He peeped through the window, without her knowledge!
      And she was bathing then. Good, that she learned it soon.

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  19. oh God! This is not acceptable!

    Nibha @ Expressions

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  20. Bathroom windows shouldn't be placed in positions that encourage peeping toms like Gaby's brother! Hope she doesn't need years of therapy after this incident!
    - Chicky @ www.mysteriouskaddu.com

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  21. It must have been terrible experience for this poor child, and so embarrassing too

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